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"I'm sorry... I love you and I always will... Where ever I go."

The phone beeped briefly as it announced the message sent as he pocketed it and took a step forwards to the platforms edge. The train was coming, it's rumbling registered even through the numbness of his mind. Unshouldering his backpack he laid it on the floor beside him then looked at the oncoming speeding monolith. It was an end, this train had come to take him away from this place - a place that up until scant moments ago had always brought him happiness. The girl he loved no longer loved him and he had to get away.

The train was near and before it passed him he jumped forwards, the breath instantly pounded from his body as the steel crashed into him, suspending him in front of it for a half a second before it braked, it's wheels screeching shrilly on the tracks as he was thrown forward; flying through the air. He thought of her, screamed her name one last time, before he hit the rails, his fragile skull cracking - his last ever thought - of her.

He was taken away, far away - the furthest he could have ever been taken, and still - through eternity, all he could think of, was her.
©2006-2009 ~Phyrehawk
:iconphyrehawk:

Author's Comments

Heh, this just kinda came into my head last night and I had to write it down before I could get to sleep. Heh.

It'll prolly be moved to scraps later... Dunno whether I'm happy with it to be honest.

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:iconpyroteamkill:
Wow. railroad kill. What a way to go.

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Sailing the seven layers of the OSI model!
Batten down the patches,
Secure the ports,
Weigh the RJ45
There be an FTP server on ther horizon ready for the plunderin'.

09-f9-11-02-9d-74-e3-5b-d8-41-56-c5-63-56-88-c0
:iconjonas-shifu:
:lmao: You took the words right out of my mouth.

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:icontonnaris:
Well thats a depressing thought

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:iconpyroteamkill:
Excelent.

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I am a LAN pirate!
Sailing the seven layers of the OSI model!
Batten down the patches,
Secure the ports,
Weigh the RJ45
There be an FTP server on ther horizon ready for the plunderin'.

09-f9-11-02-9d-74-e3-5b-d8-41-56-c5-63-56-88-c0
:iconjonas-shifu:
*Imagines PTK sitting there like Mr. Burns* :P

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:iconpyroteamkill:
Lol. I have short hand name, thanks. Took me a while to work out who PTK was.

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I am a LAN pirate!
Sailing the seven layers of the OSI model!
Batten down the patches,
Secure the ports,
Weigh the RJ45
There be an FTP server on ther horizon ready for the plunderin'.

09-f9-11-02-9d-74-e3-5b-d8-41-56-c5-63-56-88-c0
:iconsorajhannoa:
O_O

ouch.... pooor dude....
:iconryvnn:
Heh. And somehow, I feel very much drawn to this story.

Way to go ;p

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Lufia of Alekia: I can't open the safe.
geoffasraelis: *chuckles* Aw come on ;p
Lufia of Alekia: Laugh but...which way is left?
geoffasraelis: *blinks* Downwards
Lufia of Alekia: No <--- or ---->
geoffasraelis: ... Left is <---- ...
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